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Life is like a flower blowing in the wind,
it never has a destination.
It only looks beutiful as it floats along,
giving those it passes a wonderful sensation.

Its always there by your side,
until the very end.
sometimes it gets in your way,
though usually it's your friend.

You can run away from life,
no matter what others tell you.
Though it does you no good,
life tends to suit you.

It may just seem a little thing at first,
like when your holding a new born baby.
Then think back to when you were growing up,
and look at yourself and just think, maybe.

Maybe this one will turn out better,
its flower will fly much higher than mine.
So you will raise this babe with the knowledge you've gained,
and when it grows up you'll know you did fine.

Not only fine but great,
wonderful if you would like to say.
Because you raised a life not different from your own,
and it will grow as well, a new life some day.

Such is the cycle of life,
the path of all mankind.
To develop a life of your own,
this is the mystery every person has to find.
©2005-2009 ~Angeloffaithemp
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This was the first thing I ever put on DA as my journal entry. This along with the compliments on it, is what got me into writing poetry for DA. For those of you who like my poetry, and have faved it, or even just commented on it before, I thank you.

Thank you Kat, for faving almost all of my poems, and being inspiration for most of them.

Thanks Caitlin, if you see this page again, for convincing me to start putting up poetry and reading some of my poems before I put them up for the first time.

Thanks to Esterk, Tiki-Rongo, and ATCHT *sorry if I miss spelled any names* for reading my poems and for sticking with me for these past through months, I'm proud to call you guys, oh and girl sorry, my friends.

To all others who read this, thank you for reading it, if you liked this or any of my other ones, than i'm happy.

I'm sorry if I missed anyone while I was thanking people but these are the main people who have helped me out on DA, no matter how long I've known them.

Alright, well see ya later everyone.
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~besame143:iconbesame143: Aug 2, 2005, 10:19:23 PM
beautiful

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~Atcht:iconAtcht: Aug 3, 2005, 5:41:32 AM
*pats you on the back and grins*
Glad to be able to call you a friend, too.

For some reason...when I read this poem, I felt like crossing my arms and smiling proudly... As if I was looking at "my own" child - as I only want to adopt, one day.

A line or two inspired me to write a poem that doesn't revolve around the girl I write so frequently about - mostly because I misread them! XD
Either way, I enjoyed this poem...

-Atcht

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~esterk:iconesterk: Aug 3, 2005, 7:00:24 AM
No problem, friend :D
Your poems are so good! I love this one!
Its so well written and just seems to make me feel happy, a great poem, just as your other ones have been :clap:
Keep on writin, and never forget that we are always here for support :D

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~Neko-dragon:iconNeko-dragon: Aug 3, 2005, 2:37:56 PM
Your welcome! I will continue to do so as well ^^ lol :glomp:

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~Wind-of-Roses:iconWind-of-Roses: Aug 5, 2005, 10:48:46 AM
This poem is great. :clap: Very inspirational. And ever so accurate too.

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~Tiki-Rongo:iconTiki-Rongo: Aug 5, 2005, 1:25:44 PM
heh "thank me" why should you but i thank you for thanking me and then i thank you for thanking me again and again and again and again and again and again lol thats right be confeused!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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