Life is like a flower blowing in the wind,
it never has a destination.
It only looks beutiful as it floats along,
giving those it passes a wonderful sensation.
Its always there by your side,
until the very end.
sometimes it gets in your way,
though usually it's your friend.
You can run away from life,
no matter what others tell you.
Though it does you no good,
life tends to suit you.
It may just seem a little thing at first,
like when your holding a new born baby.
Then think back to when you were growing up,
and look at yourself and just think, maybe.
Maybe this one will turn out better,
its flower will fly much higher than mine.
So you will raise this babe with the knowledge you've gained,
and when it grows up you'll know you did fine.
Not only fine but great,
wonderful if you would like to say.
Because you raised a life not different from your own,
and it will grow as well, a new life some day.
Such is the cycle of life,
the path of all mankind.
To develop a life of your own,
this is the mystery every person has to find.














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Glad to be able to call you a friend, too.
For some reason...when I read this poem, I felt like crossing my arms and smiling proudly... As if I was looking at "my own" child - as I only want to adopt, one day.
A line or two inspired me to write a poem that doesn't revolve around the girl I write so frequently about - mostly because I misread them! XD
Either way, I enjoyed this poem...
-Atcht
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*~Praise be to the false god~*
Your poems are so good! I love this one!
Its so well written and just seems to make me feel happy, a great poem, just as your other ones have been
Keep on writin, and never forget that we are always here for support
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-Friedrich Nietzsche
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